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with details and make your conclusion.Coherence is also important.

Write clearly.

31.2 Advice on How to Write the Composition

1)Examine the title carefully and make sure that you understand the

main idea of the title;

2)Organize your ideas and write out an outline;

3)Produce a topic sentence for each paragraph;

4)Draft your essay.

31.3 Analysis of the Sample Test Item

1)Main idea of the title

The controlling idea is“firecrackers”.You seem to have a lot to write about.But your topic has been limited by the sentence“Should…be banned?”It is an interrogative sentence,so it must be a controversial topic.

2)Outline of the sample

Since it is a controversial topic,different opinions must exist.Thus,it is

advisable to write out the conflicting opinions of different people.

a.different

people have different opinions

b.good—reflects the heritage of Chinese

culture

adds much to the warm atmosphere

adds emjoyment of people

bad—brings great

economic loss to the country

causes certain disorder in the society

pollutes our environment

c.Your own

opinion and conclusion

3)Topic Sentence of each paragraph

① Firecrackers have been used in

China for hundreds of years.

② People in China have different

opinions about setting off firecrackers.

③ In my opinion,setting off firecrackers should be

banned.

Model Essay 31-1

Should Firecrackers be

Banned?

Firecrackers have been used in China for hundreds of years.Firecrackers were always part of

New Year's celebrations,weddings and other important occasions.

In recent years,however,people in China have different opinions about the old custom of

setting off firecrackers.Some people think setting off firecrackers is a good thing,because it reflects the heritage of

Chinese culture.It also adds

much to the enjoyment of people and the warm atmosphere during important

holidays.But others,on the other hand,believe that setting off

firecrackers should be banned.The main reasons in their eyes are that it not only brings great

economic loss to the country,but also causes certain disorder in the society.Furthermore,it pollutes our environment.

In my opinion,setting off firecrackers should be banned.However,we should replace this old custom

with new enjoyable and safe ways of entertainment.Only then can we spend our holidays in a peaceful and joyful manner.

Exercise for Unit 31

Directions:(略) Is Failure a Bad Thing?

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第三十二单元 图表作文Writing a Composition According

to Tables and Graphs

32.1 Introduction

This kind of writing is an information interpretation process.The information may be given in

numbers,lines or

curves,etc.,usually a few explanations are

given.The

organization of the writing is essential to a good essay of tables and graphs.Generally,it is as follows:

General introduction——Analysis——Conclusion

概要介绍——分析图表——总结概括

That is,in the first paragraph,you have to demonstrate the general situation of what has been

reflected in the table or graph;Then,in the second

paragraph,you have to

analyse carefully the numbers,lines or curves,and point out the rate of increase or discrease;In the end,you have to write your own opinion

or comment.

Sample Test Item

Directions:Write a composition based on the title and the following chart in no

less than 120 words.The causes are given under the horizontal line and the precentage of

the totalof 80 fire incidents is given in the vertical column on the left.write clearly.

Leading Causes of Fires in China(1987)

32.2 Basic Writing Process of the Composition

1)Have a correct understanding of the given information,and grasp the main idea;

2)Make a careful analysis of the information,for example,ask yourself the questions like:

a.Who or what

caused the fires?

b.What is the

relationship between cause and frequency of fires?

3)Write an outline;

4)Use the right technique of writing.(The most common techniques used in this kind of writing is:comparison and contrast.)

32.3 Analysis of the Sample Test Item

The main idea of the graph is:Fire causes.From the graph,we know that there are three main causes of fires:

a.Smokers (nearly50%)

b.Defective insulation (38%)

c.Children playing with matches (12%)

Thus,we can,by comparing the above information,make a comment of the main topic,then reach a conclusion.

Model Essay 32-1

From the graph above,we can see that fire,one of the most terrible killers in China,is mainly caused by smokers,defective insulations or children

playing with matches.

In 1987,80 fire incidents took place in China.While nearly50%were caused by smokers,38%were caused

by defective insulation,and12%were caused

by children playing with matches.No matter what the type of the fire,we can almost be sure that they were caused by carelessness.

From the graph,we can conclude that smokers are the leading cause of fires,but we also need to educate our

children,warning them

of the dangers of playing with matches and instruct workers be more careful

with insulation.

Writing Assignment for

Unit 32

Directions:Write a composition based on the statistical table about the total

amount of China import and export.Yourcomposition should be no less than 100 words.

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第三十三单元 英文书信写作English Letter Writing

33.1 Introduction

Letter writing tests the English letter writing skill of the

examinees.In this unit,we are going to focus on different

types of letter writing,their form and language.We will also give you some advice on how to write an effective

English letter.

33.2 Type of letters(信的类型)

English letters are generally divided into two types:

a.personal

letters个人书信

b.business

letters事务书信

33.3 Form(格式)

An English letter usually consists of six parts:heading(信头),inside address(收信人地址),salutation(称呼),body(信主体),complimentary close(结尾客套语)and signature(署名).

1)Heading:In the upper right hand corner

of the first page,write your

full address and the date.

2)Inside Address:On the left side,above the salutation,put the name and full address of

the addressee.However,this is often omitted in personal

letters.

3)Salutation:The greeting to the addressee,written flush with the left margin,two spaces below the inside address.A comma follows the salutation in a

personal letter;in a business

letter,it is

followed by a colon(:).Besides,in personal letters,first names are usually used,while in business letters,the surnames are used.

4)Body:The contents of the letter.

5)Complimentary Close:The closing of a letter.

The conventional complimentary closes in business letters are:“Yours truly,”“Yours sincerely,”“Sincerely yours,”“Sincerely,”“Cordially yours,”“Yours cordially,”etc.

The close of a personal letter is of a more free choice.“Yours,”Affectionately,“Fondly,”“Yours with love,”“Love,”“With best wishes,”etc.

6)Signature:Put your name(always handwritten).

The table below will give you a more visual presentation of the

letter form:

33.4 Language(语言)

The style and tone of a personal letter(个人书信的写作风格和笔调)differ from those of a

business letter.While the

former is casual(随便自然),the

latter is formal(正规).A

business letter should be polite in tone(笔调客气),exact and concise in wording(选词精确、恰当).However,for either of them,the style should be clear and direct(清晰、达意).Also,paragraphs in

business letters tend to be short.The first and last paragraphs are usually single-sentence paragraphs.

33.5 Advice on How to Write English Letters in CET—4Exams

1)Carefully read the directions and the requirements,distinguish the type of the letter:a personal

letter or a business letter.

2)Be clear about the purpose of the writing,and what you are to express in the letter.

3)Write according to the appropriate form.Pay attention to the different writing requirements of a personal

and business letter.

4)Try to be clear,direct,concise in your writing,avoiding too

many complimentary words.

Model of a Business Letter:

Department of Computer Science

Southeast University

Nanjing,Jiangsu Province 210025

People's Republic of China

February 8,1996

Office of Foreign Students

Yale University

New Haven,Connecticut,06520

U.S.A.

Dear Sir/Madame:

I am a senior at the Department of Computer Science,Southeast University,expecting to graduate in July this

year.I am writing

to inquire about the possibility of being enrolled in your university as a

graduate student as of September,1994.

In the past three years,I have majored in Computer Science.Presently,I am doing my graduation project.Enclosed is the transcript of all the subjects which I have so far

completed at my university.I received an excellent score in the College English Test Band-Six(CET-6)sponsored by the Educational Commission of China and therefore my

knowledge of English is adequate for me to continue my studies in the U.S.A.

Please send me information on admission to your univetsity.As I have no relatives in the U.S.A.,I would also

like to know about the procedures for applying for finacial aid.

Thank you very much.I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

(Mr.)Zhang Hua

Writing Assignment for

Unit 33

指示:你原计划要回家度暑假。写一封信告诉家人你现在决定不回去了,并解释原因。请在30分钟内写完。

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第三十四单元 转换词语Transitional Words and Phrases

34.1 Introduction

In the writing of English compositions,we have to use transitional words or phrases in order to make

logical connections between individual sentences and paragraphs as well as

enhance the overall coherence of an essay.Otnerwise,the paragraph or the essaywill be loosely connected.To see the difference,let's compare the following two

versions of a paragraph:

(1)

Speaking and writing are different in many ways.Speech depends on sounds.Writing uses written symbols.Speech developed about 500,000 years ago.Written language is a comparatively

recent development.It was invented only about six thousand years ago.Speech is usually Informal.The word choice in writing is often

relatively formal.Pronunciation

and accent are ignored in writing.A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the

writtenlanguage of most countries.Speech relies on gesture,loudness,and the rise and fall of the voice.Writing lacks gesture,loudness,and the rise and fall of the voice.Careful speakers and writers are aware of the difference.

(2)

Speaking and writing are different in many ways.Speech depends on sounds;writing,on the other hand,uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500,000 years ago,but written

language is a comparatively recent development,invented only about six thousand years ago.Speech is usually informal,while the word choice of writing,by contrast,is often relatively formal.Although pronunciation and accent are

ignored in writing,a standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written

language of most countries.Speech relies on gesture,loudness,and the rise and fall of the voice,but writing lacks these features.Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.

34.2 Analysis of the above two versions

In paragraph(1),almost all

connections are missing.Therefore,it is rather difficult for us to tell in how many ways speaking and

writing are different.In paragraph(2),however,by using the six comparsion and

contrast transitions,“on the other hand”,“but”,“while”,“by contrast”and“although”,we can easily identify that speaking and writing are different in

six aspects.

34.3 常用的转换词语类型(Types of Commonly Used

Transitional Words or Phrases)

1)Listing列举

first,second,third

firstly,secondly,thirdly

first,furthermore,finally

in the first place,in the second place,finally

last but not least

first and most important

to begin with,next,then,finally

the former…the latter the first step,the second step,the

next step

2)Illustrating(giving examples)说明(举例)

for example(f.e.) including

for instance(i.d.) mainly

namely such

as

3)Emphasizing强调

obviously certainly

undoubtedly especially

surely above all

indeed most important of all

in fact most importantly

very likely

4)Paralleling并列

or that

is,that's to say not

only…but(also)

and in

other words both…and as

well as

neither…nor either…or

5)Adding补充

also(too) gain furthermore

further moreover what

is more

then in

addition besides

as well(as)

6)Comparison and Contrast比较与对照

comparatives:the same…as;be similar to;and….,too;

(比较连接词)and…so…;not…and…not…,either;not

…neither…;both…and…;neither…nor…;

Just as…,so…;resemble;have…in common;

There are similarities between…and…

in the same way;equally important;

similarly

Contrastives:be…adj./adv.+ er…than;more…than…;

(对照连接词)less…than…;not so…as;Unlike…/

Contrary to…/As opposed to…;Although/

Whereas/While;contrast with/differ from/

be different from;however/on the other

hand/in contrast

7)Time时间

now in

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