11) a. I have heard several cases such as explosion caused by the commodities’ quality.
b. I have heard of several cases such as explosion caused by the commodities’ quality.
12) a. Once discovered, the people who produced them must be coped with strictly.
b. Once discovered, the people who produced them must be dealt with severely.
13) a. I do not believe such a ridiculous theory.
b. I do not believe in such a ridiculous theory.
-助动词，情态动词
1) a. To master almost every skill, you can’t but practice.
b. To master almost every skill, you must practice.
2) a. We cannot strain our efforts and ignore the rules.
b. We mustn’t strain our efforts and ignore the rules.
3) a. Do “lucky numbers” really bring good luck?
b. Can “lucky numbers” bring good luck to us?
H. Connectives 连接词
-用词不当/用法不当
1) a. The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly, everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk.
b. The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly and everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk.
2) a. Some were doing morning exercises, some were playing badminton, some old people were having their tea while talking to each other cheerfully.
b. Some were doing morning exercises, some were playing badminton, and some old people were having their tea while talking to each other cheerfully.
3) a. When I walked in the street, there were only some young men who were running in the street.
b. While I was walking, I found that there were only some young men running in the street.
4) a. In spite of this obvious advantage, it also brings inconvenience to some people, who have to take buses not their cars, and so slow down their speed.
b. In spite of this obvious advantage, it also brings inconvenience to some people, who have to take buses instead of their cars, and so slow down their speed.
5) a. Because a bicycle is not expensive, most families can afford it.
b. Since a bicycle is not expensive, most families can afford it.
6) a. Later, the change was going on. As a result, there were more than 100,000 TV-watchers and only more than 10,000 film-goers in 1985.
b. Later, the change continued, until there were more than 100,000 TV-watchers and only more than 10,000 film-goers in 1985.
7) a. However there are still a number of people who enjoy seeing films. Because the visual and audio effects of films are much better.
b. However there are still a number of people who enjoy seeing films, because the visual and audio effects of films are much better.
8) a. During the course of learning English, I met a lot of difficulties, such as how to enlarge my vocabulary, how to speed up reading, how to pronounce English words correctly, and so on.
b. During the course of learning English, I met a lot of difficulties, such as how to enlarge my vocabulary, how to speed up reading, and how to pronounce English words correctly, and so on.
9) a. The old ones may think too much about safety, the young ones accept it more quickly.
b. Old people may think too much about safety, while/but/whereas young people accept them more quickly.
10) a. So long as I am concerned, I am for the latter.
b. As far as I am concerned, I am for the latter.
11) a. I study hard, read a lot, take all kinds of courses in order to meet the challenge I may encounter in my future study.
b. I study hard, read a lot, and take all kinds of courses in order to meet the challenge I may encounter in my future study.
12) a. And I should get practical experience as much as theories.
b. And I should get practical experience while learning the theories.
13) a. In short, the bad ads can be classified into two categories. One category has the bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell cigarettes, drinks, guns and so on. ...The other category of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote their sales.
b. Generally speaking, the bad ads can be classified into two categories. One category has a bad purpose. The advertisers want to sell things like cigarettes, alcohol, and guns. ...The other category of bad ads are those in which the advertiser use violence and sex to promote their sales.
14) a. On the part of the interviewers, they can choose the best one out of the interviewees, other than the one appointed by the country in the past.
b. On the part of the interviewers, they can choose the best one out of the interviewees, instead of accepting the one appointed by the government as they did in the past.
15) a. No matter they are accepted or not, the interview is a good occasion for them to practice their ability of introducing themselves to others.
b. No matter whether they are accepted or not, the interview is a good occasion for them to practice their ability of packaging and selling themselves.
16) a. On the one hand, the interviewer can introduce the main thing of the job he will provide to the interviewee, such as the specific things the interviewee should do if he takes the job, and the conditions for the job, and the wage or the profit the interviewee will get.
b. On the one hand, the interviewer can introduce the main aspects of the job opening to the interviewee, such as the specific requirements for the job, the working conditions, and the wages and benefits the interviewee will get.
17) a. In my opinion, although setting off firecrackers is one of the traditions that we Chinese have.
b. In my opinion, setting off firecrackers is one of the traditions that we Chinese have.
18) a. In my opinion, first of all, firecrackers should be banned, which can reduce the damage and danger.
b. In my opinion, first of all, firecrackers should be banned, so as to reduce the damage and danger.
19) a. The first, we have more spare time. ... The second, we have enough time to do something which we like.
b. First, we have more spare time. ... Second, we have enough time to do something we like.
20) a. It is widely known that the fresh water will never be used up because we can get it from the rain, the rivers and the wells. As a matter of fact, such belief is unfortunately wrong and possibly dangerous.
b. It is widely assumed that the world’s fresh water will never be used up because we can get it from the rain, rivers and wells. Actually/In fact/Unfortunately, such belief is wrong and possibly dangerous.
21) a. And with the society developing, we need more and more fresh water to meet the needs of industries, of increasing population. On the other hand, much of our precious water is polluted.
b. And with the society developing, we need more and more fresh water to meet the needs of industries and the increasing population. In addition/Besides/Moreover, much of our precious water is polluted.
22) a. There are other countless examples. All in all, we must keep the proverb in mind for lifetime——Practice makes perfect.
b. There are other countless examples. In a word, we must keep the proverb in mind for a lifetime——Practice makes perfect.
23) a. It’s the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct in many cases even today.
b. It’s the experience of our forefathers. However, it is correct in many cases even today.
24) a. So far as I am concerned, I managed to find a part-time job——tutor an orphan.
b. As for me, I managed to find a part-time job——tutor an orphan.
25) a. Some people like having a permanent job. They don’t want to change their jobs. While some others frequently change their jobs.
b. Some people like having a permanent job. They don’t want to change their jobs. Meanwhile some others frequently change their jobs.
26) a. Almost everyone of us has bought some fake commodities, for instance, fake shoes, fake bags, and the worst thing——fake medicine.
b. Almost everyone of us has had the experience of buying fake commodities, for instance, fake shoes, fake bags and, worst of all, fake medicines.
27) a. I wandered around the park, to my delight, I found a few middle-school students talking to each other in English in the southeast corner of the park.
b. I was wandering around the park when I found, to my delight, a few middle-school students talking to each other in English in the southeast corner of the park.
-过于绝对化
1) a. On the other hand, sports have a few ill effects.
b. On the other hand, sports may also cause some ill effects.
2) a. For example, almost everybody had watched apples falling from an apple tree but only Newton discovered the Law of Gravity.
b. For example, many people had watched apples falling from an apple tree but only Newton discovered the Law of Gravity.
3) a. With the development of modern transportation, you can get to any place by plane, by car, by ship, or by bicycle.
b. With the development of modern transportation, you can get to any place by plane, by car, or by ship.
4) a. The leaders of countries always have a talk about the important events in the world, and try to find a way to keep the world’s peace.
b. The leaders of countries often visit each other, holding talks about the important events in the world, and trying to find ways to keep the world’s peace.
5) a. In return, I can also learn a lot from foreign countries so that I can serve my motherland.
b. In return, I can also learn a lot about foreign countries so that I can serve my motherland better.
6) a. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find it of no quality and worth nothing.
b. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find them of poor quality and worth nothing.
7) a. Since there are so many advantages of a job interview, those who look for a job will most certainly get a good one and those who need people to do a job will also most certainly find some one that is qualified.
b. Through the job interview, people who look for a job will have a better chance of getting a good one and those who need people to do a job will have a better chance of finding some one that is qualified.
8) a. Now, when a person is hunting for a job, there will always be a job interview.
b. Today when a person is hunting for a job, there are almost always job interviews.
9) a. In a word, firecrackers should be banned for the benefit of all people!
b. In a word, firecrackers should be banned for the benefit of most people!
10) a. “Should firecrackers be banned” is always the controversial topic among the Chinese people.
b. “Should firecrackers be banned” has been a controversial topic among the Chinese people for quite some time.
11) a. Sports fans can play in the playground.
b. Sports fans can take part in more physical activities.
12) a. Whether you will apply English or not in the future, English has undoubtedly been the most important language in our society.
b. Whether you will use English or not in the future, English has undoubtedly been one of the most important languages in our society.
13) a. Man has been able to cure the diseases which were incapable of being cured.
b. Man is able to cure the diseases which were incapable of being cured.
14) a. Nowadays our knowledge is mostly derived from books, which is really limited.
b. Nowadays, as students, our knowledge is mostly derived from books, which is really limited.
15) a. With the rapid development of our society, the campus is no longer an ivory tower.
b. With the rapid development of our society, the university campus can no longer be an ivory tower.
16) a. Those who have fallen victims of fake commodities will never buy them again, even the commodities are good next time.
b. Those who have fallen victims to fake commodities of a certain brand will never buy that brand again, even if the commodities are genuine the next time.
17) a. Hence, 13, 4 and other so-called “evil” numbers are wiped off from cards, lists, menus, etc.
b. Hence, 13, 4 and other so-called “evil” numbers are wiped off from certain cards, lists, menus, etc.
逻辑不够严密
1) a. Though it gives us more convenience, the two-day weekend has quite a few problems.
b. Though it gives us more convenience, the two-day weekend has also given rise to quite a few problems.
2) a. Some students who are interested in social work can join many clubs.
b. Students who are interested in campus activities can join different clubs.
3) a. I take CET-6 not only for passing the test, but for improving my English.
b. I take CET-6 not only for passing the test, but for further improving my English.
4) a. With the increasing number of population and factories, the amount of the fresh water in use is also growing rapidly.
b. With the growth of population and industry, the amount of the fresh water used is also growing rapidly.
5) a. They recite words at the very moment and after some time...
b. They try to memorize words at the very moment they come across them and review them time and again...
6) a. Otherwise, you suffer from it, because you can’t exert your every effort in your job.
b. Otherwise, you suffer from it, because you have got no motivation to exert your every effort in your job.
7) a. Almost everyone of us has bought some fake commodities.
b. Almost everyone of us has had the experience of buying fake commodities.
8) a. Of course, some people have had good luck through “lucky numbers”, but I think that that is only a chance.
b. Of course, some people think they have had good luck through “lucky numbers”, but I think that that is only a chance.
9) a. Have you ever wondered that numbers would associate with your luck?
b. Have you ever wondered whether numbers would associate with your luck?
II.句法错误
主谓一致
1) a. But now large amounts of water and air has been polluted, which brings about various problems troubling man’s life.
b. But now large amounts of water and air have been polluted, which brings about various problems troubling their life.
2) a. My ideal job is a teacher.
b. My ideal job is to be an excellent teacher.
-重复
1) a. Man is faced with more and more problems which threaten man’s existence on Earth.
b. Man is faced with more and more problems which threaten his existence on Earth.
2) a. People’s opinions about whether firecrackers should be banned vary from person to person.
b. Opinions about whether firecrackers should be banned vary from person to person.
3) a. During the past thirty years, developing countries have been greatly developed in many aspects.
b. During the past thirty years, developing countries have made great progress in many aspects.
B. 从句
-定语从句
1) a. We may encounter some problems which need not only natural science but also social science.
b. We may encounter some problems whose solution involves knowledge not only of natural science but also of social science.
