There is no doubt that this problem is urgent task for us because we have only one earth. In my opinion, first we must draw everyone’s attention to save our natural resources. Second, governments should cooperate with each other and make laws to control fishing. Third, we should try our best to improve sciences and technologies to find out more resources. In one word, protecting natural resources is the same like protecting our mankind.
[给分] 8分
[评语] 内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达基本清楚；但结构与用词错误较多，有少数是严重错误；长度符合要求。
(4)
With the development of economy, more and more people fish in the ocean only for money. As show in the graph, in 190, there were many fishes seen, and only one fishing ship, in 1995, the number of fish we can see were very few and at the same time, many fishing ships occurred before our eye.
The purpose of the drawer of picture that with the grow of fishing, the balance in the ocean will be broken. And the fish human beings can get to decrease quickly. People warn to pay attention to this problem happened in the sea.
So we must make active step to keep the situation of continuing. First, education must be made to people, Second, government make laws to stop fishing in ocean. In sum, we must protect the balance in the ocean in order to protect human ourselve.
[给分] 5分
[评语] 内容切题，包括提纲要点；语句尚可理解，但结构与用词错误多；有些是严重错误；长度基本符合要求。
(5)
The picture say in 1900 the ocean a lot of fish but only a ship fishing there. On constrat, in 1995, there is one fish on the ocean, but ships are many and many.
Obvious, drawer of pictures tell us this quantity of fish had decrease too much from 1900 to 1995. The fish will all dead in future according to that.
We must to take measure. Firstly, we must to decrease ship. And Secondly, we must to increase the fish. If this can do, we see many fish for future.
[给分] 2分
[评语] 与题意勉强有关，但条理不清，不成篇章；语句错误多且严重；词不达意。
对比阅读：
（学生作文）
The set of picture depict that the fish has been declined by the commercial fishing. The peace which the fish once knew, and which a fish should always have has been swept ruthlessly away. As picture shows, in 1900, we can see innumerable fishes with only one fishing boat above them. Whereas in 1995, there is a countless fishing-boat with only one fish.
The purpose of the drawing is to show us it is time to protect our resources. Over-fished result the number of fish dramatically decreased. If we continued to abuse this problem, the ocean resources will be devastated, and no benefactions and endowments can make up for the change in character which it has scattered.
So measures must be taken. Many people think that should appeal to authorities to make strict laws to restrict commercial fishing, say, to restrict the amount of catch and the catch time and so on. The is true. But the significant thing is not the law or rule or regulation itself. but the behavior of people who must obeyed it; and, behind the, of the authorities attitudes—must be seriously. Only if something has been done can we genuinely expect a ideal picture in which we can enjoy plenty of ocean resources.
（学生作文二）
With the (big boom) of world commercial fishing, the intrinsic balance between humans and environment is being destroyed. As in the first picture there was only one fishing-boat working in the ocean in 1900, (versus) a tremendous amount of fish swimming freely and carelessly under it. However, unfortunately, things got to the other extreme within less than one century. As is shown in picture two, that is 1995, plenty of fishing-boats were hunting eagerly for their prays, the pray, I should say, in shapely contrast with the first drawing, for there was only one fish which was available for them.
The purpose of the drawer is to stir the awareness of the authorities and the average people that as to over fishing our ocean resources have already been in scarce and if we insist on what we are committing now without any consideration for the other habitats of the earth, soon we sill have to suffer the tragic consequence we brought about. As an old Chinese saying goes, “the teeth will be chilly without the protection of lips.”
Thus, it is urging and imperative for us to take counter-measures to relieve and ultimately solve the problem. Firstly, the authorities should make strict and perfect laws to control the commercial fishing effectively soundly, the media and the schools should play a positive and significant role in spreading the know ledge of environment protection as well. Last but not the least, the common people should enhance the awareness of protecting environment and take concrete action to say sorry to the deeply hurt nature for what we have done. For only we all realize it, we can tackle the difficulty properly and timely, and create a brilliant future for us and our offsprings.
（学生作文三）
As vividly depicted in the drawer below, there was only one ship in the ocean in 1900 while there were so many fishes. By contrast, the number of ships has increased dramatically by the end of 1995, but varieties of fishes have dropped greatly. There was only one fish in the second picture while were a large number of ships.
Observers are expected to learn that it will lead to the extinction of sea lives if the ocean capture is immoderate. As the population increased, the consumption of fish has jumped a lot. It is inevitable that fish caption got to a higher point. However, fishes will not be bred to maturation so quickly, and if the capture is eccessive the ocean lives will be disappeared sooner or later.
Therefore, we should take some steps to improve the situation. First of all, it is right for us to regulate the amounts of ships which are used to capture fishes. Then, we should also confine the scale so that it will be illegal for ships to capture fishes in certain areas. Moreover, t deserves penalty if ships captured young fishes, In a word, only in this way can we share a harmony environment with all lives in the world.
范文三：
2001
Directions:
Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his or her own understanding of it.
There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to
1. Show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the pictures below.
2. Give a specific example, and
3. Give your suggestion as to the best way to show love.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET II.
各档次分数段例文
(1)
Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest. It is of the utmost importance to the human beings. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give love.
As is described in the picture, “love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places.” This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than ordinary people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life and progress. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life and progress. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strengh and courage to step out of their difficulties.
For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his life. Or when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish her schooling and change her life, you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.
So to sum up, we should offer our help to all who are in need. We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others so when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don’t hesitate to give your love to him. I believe then the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in.
(2)
It is generally believed that love is a hot topic which is most talked about. This is true not only in China but also in other countries. We live in different countries, speak different languages, but love is something common to us all. But how to show love may be different with different people in different countries. This is something we should give more thought to.
As shown in the picture, love is like a lamp which shines brightest in dark places. This tells us a simple truth: Love is like a lamp. It is most valuable when it is most needed. For example, once I saw a foreign lady get lost in the street. She could not speak Chinese and nobody seemed to be able to help her. Though my English is not very good and I am a shy person, I thought she needed help very much. I asked her what she wanted. She told me she lost her way, so I showed her the way to her hotel. It was a small thing but she thanked me very much because my help was needed very much. My help was like a lamp in a dark place.
I think we all should be like a lamp in a dark place, showing our love, giving our help to others, even to strangers. In this way, we can make this world a harmonious and peaceful world.
[给分] (1) 20分；(2) 18分。
[评语] 内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；文章通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样；用词面较宽；虽有个别不妥之处，但该生基本功较好；表达能力较强；长度符合要求。
(3)
I saw a picture recently in your newspaper. There is a small lamp in the picture and a flame on the lamp, which is smiling. The lamp says, “Love is a lamp, it will be brightest in the darkest place.” I think it shows us a vivid picture: Where and who need live, love is the noblest feeling. So I believe that we should give our love to those who are in need. If everyone can give his love to whom in need, then the world will be filled with love.
For example, in the countryside. There are millions of pupils, who can’t afford to attend school. Some of them never attend school. They are unfortunate, but now there are many warm-hearted people who give help to the pupils. Of course, we can also show our love in many other ways. For instance. As a friend, we should help our friends when they are in trouble. There is a saying: A friend in need is a friend in deed. As a young man, we should respect the older. When we walk on the street, we can help the blind or old people and children to cross the road.
In a word, There are many ways to show our love. The people all over the world should love and respect each other. The best way to show our love is to help others when they are in difficulties.
(4)
Everyone may agree that among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest. But people have different understanding of it. As can be seen from the picture, there is one point of view. It says that love is like a lamp, which is brighter when the dark is heavier. This means that love should be given to where it is most needed. I agree with this point of view.
Take my experience for a example. Being poor, I have to do some part-time jobs to support my study in Beijing. I always feel love from other friends and families when they help me either in material or in spiritual aspects. I love them and want to give my help to other people at the same time. But some of my classmates take their parents’ help for granted.
They never try to support them by working on the side. They have no idea of difficulties in one’s life. Therefore, they don’t realize the value of love.
As for the best way to show love, I think, first of all, everyone should be couraged and required to try to be self-reliant. Secondly, when one is in trouble, others should help him. Finally we should educate people to appreciate help from other people. Only in this way can our society become a big happy family.
[给分] (3) 16分；(4)14分。
[评语] 内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；表达基本清楚，文字连贯；句式变化较多；结构与用词有少量一般性错误；长度符合要求。
(5)
As is shown in the picture, we can see clearly that love is like a lamp and the darker the environment is, the brighter love is. And it is no denying that among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is the noblest. Actually, because of love, many people in trouble get help and encourage, so they will try their best to overtake the difficulty and look forward to a better future. What’s more, when others are in trouble, they take helping them for granted. Therefore, love will be found all over the world.
Several years ago, some areas suffer disaster because of heavy rain. The PLA help them rebuild their families. This year, Taiwan also suffer disaster because of the earth quake. Many people in our country do our best to help them.
It is necessary to take some measure to spread the love. For one thing, we should encourage people who have love and are happy to help others. For another, we should enhance the awareness of people that love is benefit for al of this society. Also I make sure that by this way, we have a brighter future.
(6)
In the picture below, in the full dark situation, a little of spark enlightens the dark. The naive spark smiles so sweet. It seems to be saying, as the caption in the picture reads, I am a light of love, the more dark where I am, the more enlighten.
Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest. As a matter of fact, all of us survive in a love world. We offer love, more important, we need love. I am a hardworking student that is specialized in Computer Science and Application. Once a time, I lost my mind accidentally as a result I dropped down from the downstairs, badly injured. But for my roommates’ help I couldn’t live up not only in physics but also in spirits. I thank them genuinly. What I accomplished today party attribute to all of them giving me a hand to my school work. I hope I can live up to myself as well as my roommates.
As far as I am concerned, love should be showed by two means as follows. At the first place, we should keep a critical eye on others’ love showed to us. Of course, most of the love is good for us, nevertheless, some does harm to us, such as helping to cheating in exams. The last but no the least, we should show love hearts to those needing them. As we know, Hope Project is the largest love project in our country, we should pay highly attention on it rather than neglect. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness to help others in our daily life. Let’s hold our hands to build our country filled in love hearts.
[给分] (5)12分；(6) 10分。
[评语] 内容切题，包括题中所列三方面的全部内容；表达基本清楚；但结构与用词错误较多，有少数是严重错误；长度符合要求。
(7)
This picture tells us a reality that love can bring up lighting and the light will make everywhere bright. Although the light is weak, it plays a great effect which will make people more firmly than before.
When I was at middle-school, my parent were both out of employee. My parent felt disappointed and I was greatly worried my future. Our life became very terrible, I even decided to suicide. Our neighbour learnt about my family’s condition, and they began to help us. They lent a few money to my parent and my parent use these money to open a shop. They help me to study. My parent finally got through hard life. So I say that love is great.
I think that there are some ways to show love. You may give money to the poor and help the old do some working and give your love to the disable. The best way show love is from heart rather than from appearance. By this way those people who accepted helps will feel warmly. Our world will bright if everyone show love.
