So I'd like to present my private views about this issue that our society evolves through one essential mechanism that we can call it "social selection" associated to natural selection which is working in the same way. One's competitiveness cannot be developed by mere protection but his adaption to environment. Conclusively ,adolescents' experiences of difficulties may be their possetions to deal with grater challenges in the future.
范文六：
2004
Directions:
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1. describe the drawing.
2. interpret its meaning, and
3. support your view with examples.
You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
各档次分数段例文：
(1)
The cartoon depicts a vivid picture in which an athlete, dripping sweat, is rushing to the end. Obviously, he wins the match, but this is not the key message conveyed by the picture. The most striking feature of the drawing is that the same line is marked as both “the start” and “the end”, which indicates that although the athlete came to the finish, a new race is waiting for him.
The idea conveyed by the cartoon is apparent: the end is a new start. It is widely accepted that we should not be satisfied with the present achievement, for nowadays new challenges and competition never stop. The market economy and competitive society drives many people studying hard for higher academic degrees, some of them even seeking the opportunities to study abroad. We should spare no efforts improving ourselves, master high technology and professional skills. The we can make use of it to devote ourselves to society.
Take my father as an example. He was denied higher education for historical reasons. But by self-study he became a technician in a factory. Many people thought he was content. But he never stopped studying. He took courses of law in his spare time. Later he became a lawyer. “The finishing point is just a new starting point”, he said to me.
(2)
As is shown in the picture, on arriving at the finishing line of a race on the playground, the lovely young man has to continue his new journey in no time instead of stopping to take a rest. He has successfully settled the puzzle of “stopping or going on” which might have confused many others.
With the increasing pace of modern life, perhaps no change has characterized the past decase more dramatically than that of people’s view on their own life. It is generally agreed upon that people have to adjust themselves to this new change. On the one hand, no doubt, people will gain a lot by setting new goals in their daily life. take the famous scientist Thomas Edison for example. He had done very well in his early life, but continued to pursue something more difficult all through his life. On the other hand, if one is obsessed with the success he has achieved, he would lose the chance to pursue new success. What is more, he may become the slave of his success. There are many cases showing that people lose their courage to better themselves after becoming successful.
To sum up, one’s view on his success determines his future. In my opinion, it is necessary to carry out a nation-wide campaign publicizing people who have a burning desire for more and ever greater achievement when they are already well-known. So that people in the society will develop a forward-looking attitude and make their life worth living and the world more beautiful as well.
评分：18分（1）19分（2）
评语：内容切题：表达清楚，连贯，句式有变化；句子结构和用词正确，仅有个别错误。
(3)
Here is a drawing of a running boy who is reaching the finishing line. He looks tired but happy because we can see he will be the winner of a race. But just before the finishing-line which is decorated beautifully by flags and trees, writes two Chinese characters which mean “Start point”. Under this drawing lies its title “finishing-point is a new start-point as well.”
We can easily understand what this drawing wants to tell us. Our life is just like a race in which we will have many short-time aims. When we achieve our aims, we will be happy and think we have finished the race. However, we will soon realize that a finishing-point is just an new start-point. We don’t have much time to stay and take a rest. The race is still going on, and we have to run. We will soon have new aims and join new races and try our best to be the first place.
I have learned this when I was a child. When I got the first place in a singing contest in my primary school, my teacher told me to forget it after informing me this good news. I did not understand at that time. But soon I met more girls and boys who could sing better in other contests and when I was lost afterwards I understand that if I fulfilled what I had already got, I would not always be the first. So I kept on running. I kept on running when I got to the middle-school with the first-class score, where I met new classmates and joined a new race. Similarly when I got to university I didn’t stop. A finishing-line just means the past. Maybe you were the best, but that does not mean you can always be if you don’t know a new race has begun.
A finishing point is a new start point as well. We shall always remember.
(4)
There’s always no real end of a road for a person. Endpoint may also be a start point. As the drawing describes, having reached an end point, one should not stop. For it’s a new start at the same time, and he has to continue to run. It reveals that one the way of our life, we have to forget what we have got, look forward and run straight to another point.
Take myself for example, I’ll finish my college education in this summer. It’s an end of my four years’ study, but it’s also a new start of my life. I could choose to pursue my study or to find a job. Both mean a new start. If I just stand at the point without doing anything, others who were behind me will catch me up. So all I have to do is to forget the past and to continue running. As I want to pursue my study, I will choose the graduate entrace examination and becoming a graduate as my new start point. For the new aim, I’ll not stop for a minute. Perhaps someone will ask: “Won’t you feel tired while there is no end?” My answer will be:”Run further, Get more and Be happier”
Time is limited for everyone of us. We could not waste it hesitating about what to do next at an endpoint. Look forward, a new way is waiting for us. Let’s go!
评分：14分（3）15分（4）
评语：内容切题，条理清楚，句式有一定变化，用词与结构有一些错误。
(5)
The drawing depicts that a boy after a long distance running, is just hitting the ending rod. There are two marks on the ground. The one after the boy marks “ending” and the one in front of the boy marks “starting”.
From the drawing, we can conclude easily that “Ending Means Another Beginning”. Defferent races that come around one after another consist our lives. We have no choice but to face them. In college, we “run” with our classmates. In company, we “run” with our colleagues. During the race, we must always try out best for if you are lazy you will loss your position. To “run” faster and to keep up with the quick development of modern technology and our society is the principle of future society. The early you end the race, the early you can begin the next one the more chances you may held.
Now days with the quick development of technology, we scientific college student must try to keep up with it. We shouldn’t satisfied with what we have achieved. Developing is the first principle. The only thing we can do now is running and developing.
(6)
From the picture, it can be seen that a boy is rushing through the termination in the playground, with rainy sweats on his head. But he can not stop and continue to run forwards, obviously, he know that it does not mean that he has completely succeed, ahead of him there will still be a long way to go.
Clearly, the drawer, through the picture, aims at revealing to us such a opinion that whatever things people are engaged in, always, exist as a course and striving for grand ambitions should not be put to an end. As the title goes, termination just signals a newer scratch.
We can take as one example the economic development of our country. We, as is known to all the world, have experienced such large amounts of changes in the previous twenties years, as GDP’s ever-lasting increase and people’ living standards’ drastic improvement. Faced with these honorable achievements, however, our government again lay down new planning for agriculture and industry. Another case in point is that we, like the two little trees in the picture, today participate the test of graduate admission with a purpose of furthering our tomorrow’s studies. Entering graduate’s education is not the eventual aim, but a new beginning of a longer journey. Only if we persevere to work hard and go all out to do everything we like to do, in a lifetime, will we be successful persons.
评分：10分（5）11分（6）
评语：基本切题，句子结构与用词有许多错误，其中一些是严重错误。
(7)
The place of end point is also the starting point. From the picture, we can see a young man who is running toward the end point, it’s very clearly to show that everyone of us must effect and can’t stop for the aim of us in the fierce competition society. As we all know, firstly, a young man who study and work in he modern society need have a spirit of to study hard and activity, to keep a good situation and position.
For instance, this year is my ninth year after when I graduated, after nine years, I’m always feeling need to continue study to improve my knowledge of major. because, this society developing is so rapidly, if I can’t catch more knowledge of now about my major, I will can’t keep the continous developing society. So I think, personally, It’s like the sportman of the picture that only continue to run and effort toward the place of end point, that is necessary to young people in the society.
In summary, my final conclusion is only t continue running toward end place and the place is also a new starting for another aim, only so. It’s a spirit of all young people. although the road is very hardship. but this is very important to us.
(8)
As is known to all people should never give up hard working. Just like a drawing has told us. In the drawing, there is a runner who has reached the end, but he doesn’t stop, he is keeping on running. The runner doesn’t have a rest because of he knows the end is also the new being.
Different people, however, have different opinions on whether we should keep on running or have a rest at the end of a job. Some people think we should keep on running, because the end is also the new being. In their opinion if one want to be a successor must always works hard. Others think we won’t keep on running, we should take a rest. In their opinion they can’t do a painswork. To my view, I think the end is also the new being, we must do our best to keep on running, working. For example, Chinese people has fight against SARS for several months, and we got a stage success, but we shouldn’t have a rest, because if we don’t take care of SARS and if we don’t keep on working hard, perhaps we will be ill again.
As far as I am concend, I think we should keep on running at the end becase the end is also the new being, and I believe if we want to be success keep on running is both soundable and well-grounted.
评分：6分（7）8分（8）
评语：基本包括题目所要求的内容，但条理不清，语言错误很多，其中多数是严重错误。
(9)
The runner get to the end of the run-way but he get to the began of the run-way too.
The over is the begain, it is not meaning that the begain is not according the end. The begain is wew level’s begain. It means that the other thing begainin to do.
The thing must go to the other begain of one the begain. The success must base on the other success, if not, the world would not develop.
To me, it is this sureacion.
I have finished minlity school, it is the end, but I begain to study, university lass, it is the begain. I begain to study university class is base on that having finished the minling school class.
If not, I can’t study university class.
The begain is new begain.
(10)
it can be seen from the above picture that a body is running in the playgount, and his right foot is on a line. At the right od line is written end, and at the left of the line is written beginning. And there is no sign that he want to stop.
One line is the end of one thing and also is the beginning of the other thing. In my opinion, there is the meaing of the picture that things are again to again. We complicated something, the other is start.
There are many in point case about this. When we completed the middle school, we need a beginning of the university. When we completed the work of one source, it is time to beginning of do other source. Because the before source is the base of the ofter source. There is no end in the world, you must run again and again, that is the meaning of life. life can ofters a thougsand chances that is one beginning of something, but you have to do is to come to the end of another things.
评分：2分（9）4分（10）
评语：思想混乱，支离破碎，语句不通，错误百出，只有个别词可理解。
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